Thursday, 11 August 2011

Chapter sixteen

I've spent the whole day re-arranging this bloomin' chapter. It's the motivation of two main characters, Janika and Elias, that has to be right and after a lot of messing I changed the dynamic totally and it feels better. Finger's crossed

1 comment:

  1. This type of edit can be so frustrating but you can't beat that feeling when it all comes together!