Friday, 22 January 2010

A nod in the right direction

Sometimes you come across a sentence in a novel that even you can improve upon. This little gem pulled me right out of a best-seller by someone who will remain nameless in case they read this and in case one day I might meet them and then I'd feel, know. What is it?

Amy nodded but didn't respond verbally.

For what it's worth, I'd lose the last four words.

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