Sometimes you come across a sentence in a novel that even you can improve upon. This little gem pulled me right out of a best-seller by someone who will remain nameless in case they read this and in case one day I might meet them and then I'd feel, well...you know. What is it?
Amy nodded but didn't respond verbally.
For what it's worth, I'd lose the last four words.
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